Friday, August 20, 2021

Poem: August 17, 2021

Initiating Energy


It happens when

we analyze a poem.


I’m at the board

and I ask, 


What do you see?


And at first

the room hesitates, 

looks down 

at its collective feet


until one half-hand

has the half-courage

to half-lift itself up

just enough so I notice


and a quiet voice asks,


Did anyone else think it was weird that…


and then, yes, so many

ideas falling over each other- what if,

but couldn’t it, I imagined, why not, 

connotation, end stop, reversal, personification, tone-


and I say prove it 

and step aside to let the big idea bus through.


Then, 

when it all

winds down

to a long 

pause,


I say, Look at the title. Have you considered the title?


And then smile to hear the engine rev.

 

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